Nowadays, in this competitive and complicated world, growing worldwide demand for freshwater is one of the most prominent challenges in whole of world. There are significant debates about the most effective reasons and best solution ways for this phenomenon between scientists in all countries.
Some environmental scientists argue that this event has several considerable main causes. First of all, majority of them are unanimous in detrimental effect of increasing world`s population on water`s calamity. As they have mentioned countries competition on industrial and urban life is the second reason for this demand. On the other hand because of decreasing amount of rain and snow in all areas around the world, amount of water in rivers and lakes has been decreased sharply. Furthermore, nature refrigerators became smaller and the climate in all over the world was altered. These reasonable reasons lead to diminish freshwater resources in all over the world. Recent published reports in British Colombia University illustrated that amount of freshwater in whole of world is declined more than 30% within last 20 years.
On the other aspect, obviously by pursuing this pattern of water consumption numerous fundamental issues in people`s life will create undoubtedly. Hence, governments should devise some strategic plans to decrease deleterious effects of water disaster. Some experts have recommended some programs to governments like increasing water cost for consumers, fabricating dams to keep water and allocating sufficient money to distribute water infrastructures. According to last report in U.K. the number of dams was doubled during recent decade. Additionally, people should consume freshwater less than before to avoid some enormous problems in future.
In conclusion, scientists estimated that by continuing this pattern in freshwater problems we will have lots of conflicts between countries because of water in next 50 years in all over the world. In my point of view, first of all we should recognize unaccustomed situation for this event in all over the world and then by utilizing some preventive actions should avoid these problems as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 642, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... before to avoid some enormous problems in future. In conclusion, scientists estimated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, then, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58083832335 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02505463982 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1121474743 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176138297256 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609914848015 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444147492975 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114138590242 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229488989445 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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