With the advancement of technology, people can get the information in one second by clicking on their electronic gadgets. There is a statement that in coming years, no one would purchase printed magazines or books due to the internet. In this contemporary era, everyone is well-educated, and they will prefer to scan news online. I agree with this notion and this essay will highlight the valid reasons to substantiate the same.
To begin with, reading news or books online have several benefits. First and Foremost, there are numerous applications are available online related to news and books which people can install in their mobile phones. Due to which, they will get various variety of news related to sports, fashion and entertainment. People can gather columns according to their desires. Most crucial thing, it will save the precious time of the individuals. Moreover, nowadays on the internet people also have an option to listen news as well as watch videos related to news. For instance, a survey was conducted in 2018 has revealed that 60% of persons interested in reading news or books online rather than printed newspaper.
Nevertheless, there are a number of regions of the country in which individuals are unfamiliar with electronic devices. They only reliant on printed newspaper and books. Furthermore, mostly seniors or mid- aged people prefer buying paper journals rather than reading online information owing to the fact that they do not have internet connection in their mobile phones. To instance, almost three quarters of consumers are aged generation who are interested in reading printed newspaper than online.
To conclude, I believe that it is good for human beings to study news online those have great knowledge of the internet. However, mature generation is merely dependent on printed newspaper to obtain instructions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38194444444 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05882873927 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3932081608 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.909090909 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277665203494 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108249214254 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660392934767 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169106181969 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488778260739 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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