There is an increase number of people living in homes with small or limited outdoor space as the urban population grows . It is a negative development because this phenomenon has a detrimental impact on the psychology and physical body of human beings
To begin with, living in a house with a small or limited outdoor space has many disadvantages.Firstly, people may suffer from illnesses associated with respiratory disease because this type of house has fewer vents to circulate air, causing the germs and viruses to be trapped. In addition to this, they are likely to be affected by problems related to mental health, such as depression, anxiety, and so on, since individuals live in houses with little outdoor space.For example, according to a recent study, those who live in houses with large open spaces are less likely to suffer from illnesses related to mental health compared to those who live in houses with limited outdoor space.
Moreover, if people are living in houses with limited outdoor space, they are likely to become lazy.since not having outdoor space makes people less productive because they do not do physical activity, and hence they may suffer from obesity. For instance, the World Health Organization revealed that 33 percent of the global population lives a sedentary lifestyle because of a lack of outdoor space.Further more, it is responsible for the decrease in immunity of humans since human beings are little or not exposed to sunlight.As a consequence, they are likely to be more affected by various diseases.For example, 45% of teenagers suffer from health issues because they are not exposed to sunlight.
To sum up, this is a negative development because the trend of having houses with limited outdoor space is responsible for mental and physical illnesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14527027027 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85370171242 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.718885699 49.4020404114 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.833333333 106.682146367 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.8333333333 7.06120827912 281% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288241944754 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157844405219 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102869348837 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206564597723 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675210842736 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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