There is no denying the fact that history is forgotten in the day to day lives. In the modern era, history shows that the masses have often thought about making favourable societies, while the more of time fail in the make of creating ideal societies. However, I will explain my perspective views and easy details in the upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, it is observed that the majority of individuals thought about of imitate of the past culture and they should not overlook the traditional culture in these days time. They are always learning about the cultural history of their infants. Sometimes, they visit historical museum place with families and children. Owing to this, they are creating ideal societies. For example, it observed that Indian people celebrate festivals in living nations viz, Diwali, Holi and Lohri, who shown past culture.
To embark with, which they are care of the tourist historical place, who built in nations. Level of government, while the authority should be spent more money on old tourist place. Because it is a sign of our cultural history and it is tourist place for spare of time. Moreover, there coming from other countries visitors for a watch that your people sacrifice for to protect our nation. In addition to, the level of people should be that support of government for taking care of the historical places. Nonetheless, when they visit there so they are read history, who is written there and they are learning a good habit, which is available in sacrifice people. And they should hold a historical program in societies, so the upcoming generation is learning.
To sum up, I pen down saying that, a perfect society is difficult to attain as everyone has different concepts of an ideal society. However, if we all respect our freedom and in doing so know our limitations so that others can enjoy their freedom then it can be called an ideal societ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...an people celebrate festivals in living nations viz, Diwali, Holi and Lohri, who shown ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, then, while, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91021671827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52406109548 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.581376526 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226129546893 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647751022254 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844141885019 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143499421355 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759110709257 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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