It is often argued that the existence of flora and fauna rates is gradually decreasing because of man-made activities. Few of them are having the opinion that it is unavoidable. On the other hand, some believe that this extinction can be controlled by following the preventive measures. I strongly obey the fact that these species can be saved by implementing certain rules and guidelines for human occupation.
Firstly, The extinction of plants and animals is majorly caused due to man-made activities compared with natural causes. Deforestation results in a major cause of this in higher percentages. For instance,many countries are cutting down forests and replacing them with industries. As a result, the wilder lives are shifted to the zoological parks or taken their lives. Not only the valuable species numbers are reduced, but also result in a disturbance in their natural habitats. In addition, the dangerous gasses and chemicals from factories cause harm to the environment and global warming rates are increasing day by day.
Secondly, I admit that the vanishing of herbs and animals can be managed by conducting awareness campaigns and educating the needs and deeds. In other words, the schools and universities should include environmental science in their curriculum which results in the younger and the youth not only understanding the importance but also the consequences of the destruction of the species. Furthermore, every individual is responsible to plant trees. In addition, the government bodies should regulate the industries and need to set up the laws to reduce the release of the endangered calamities in order to improve the flora and fauna count.
To conclude, conducting awareness programs in society and regulating the industries can reduce the damage to crops and creatures.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...It is often argued that the existence of flora and fauna rates is gradually decre...
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...ccupation. Firstly, The extinction of plants and animals is majorly caused due...
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...ot only the valuable species numbers are reduced, but also result in a disturbanc...
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...every individual is responsible to plant trees. In addition, the government bodie...
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...the release of the endangered calamities in order to improve the flora and fauna ...
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...fauna count. To conclude, conducting awareness programs in society and regul...
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...clude, conducting awareness programs in society and regulating the industries ca...
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... the industries can reduce the damage to crops and creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37192982456 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01865340678 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7080938859 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144617793281 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447268661209 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557825075474 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07922391848 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570563281106 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...It is often argued that the existence of flora and fauna rates is gradually decre...
^^
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccupation. Firstly, The extinction of plants and animals is majorly caused due...
^^
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...this in higher percentages. For instance,many countries are cutting down forests and ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot only the valuable species numbers are reduced, but also result in a disturbanc...
^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... schools and universities should include environmental science in their curriculu...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...every individual is responsible to plant trees. In addition, the government bodie...
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Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the release of the endangered calamities in order to improve the flora and fauna ...
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Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fauna count. To conclude, conducting awareness programs in society and regul...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...clude, conducting awareness programs in society and regulating the industries ca...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the industries can reduce the damage to crops and creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37192982456 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01865340678 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7080938859 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144617793281 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447268661209 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557825075474 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07922391848 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570563281106 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.