Many people only effort for the similar organization all their life. However, Others believe that it is greater to struggle for various organizations.
In the first place, there are many advantages of efforting for the same organization. First, you will be a master of your job and help to your new workmates. You will earn a large salary than others for your loyalty to the company.
Then, You will have a great reputation and have experience than others. You might be close with your manager or director, and he will support your ideas and skills. Furthermore, one day you will become a manager
of this company. But it has got some disadvantages of working for the same organization. First of all ,you can not change atmosphere in the company. You will work only on the similar projects and can not develop your other undiscovered skills and abilities.
Alternatively, there are advandatages and disadvantages of working for various managements. First, you will have large amounts of workmates and friends, you can enjoy being in different atmospheres and various projects. Although you will work under different directors,conditions and circumstances You will be able to increase your knowledge of skills. On the other hand, if you work for different managements, you will lose your concentration.
To sum up, I can say that working for various organizations have much more disadvantages than his advantages. From my point of view, I think it is better to work for the same organization and stay loyal for one company have much more advantages than his disadvantage
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , conditions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, i think, first of all, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09652509653 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14300892313 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509652509653 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.298920472 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.6470588235 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29984243808 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123578099865 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949222569003 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178703948047 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848649128108 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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