Actually, illiteracy affects to an important part of the world. Many countries are facing this common issue since centuries. The lack of interest of the government is the main cause of the existence of illiteracy. Too many distractors are the principal consequence of illiteracy to many places. Unfortunately, poor countries are the most common places that face this problem. However, recent studies by scholars indicate that is not only a third world problem. Surprisingly, they have found that in the first world, the illiteracy impacted to many individuals. In the following essay, I will give some possible reasons to explain this phenomenon.
First, many governments show lack of interest in important areas on their places. For example, they provide less economic support to the field of education. Many institutions are closing their doors, because the decrease of funds. Instead of providing resources to these fields, governments are spending time and financials to companies, in order to win high status, and obtaining high reputation with other nations. For example, I live in Mexico, and the government is mainly interested to have a commercial trade with other nations. As a result, our country is facing a big trouble in security, education and other public needing. As a result, many people in our society could not get a high academic status and too many kids do not go to school. Therefore, they are facing the illiteracy problem.
Second, the war of commerce in the first world is the principal target to people who lead those countries. For example, in United States and Australia, many studies revealed that the rate of illiteracy is increasing rapidly. I suppose that the main issue is because those leaders are trying to gain economic power, and as a result, they are avoiding important areas like education. Moreover, this evidence could explain why many people, nowadays in those countries are facing this phenomenon.
Finally, I can state that illiteracy is being existing since centuries. Nevertheless, we are living modern times, and it is hardly to understand why we are still facing this issue. Thus, big societies should pay attention to solve this problem, putting aside the government and politicians as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, third, thus, well, for example, i suppose, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2182320442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81206921686 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1137101459 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1304347826 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7391304348 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21739130435 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142086802552 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049452725872 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571563307664 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933250696599 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573558157274 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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