Undoubtedly, this is a fact that about a quarter of the population has been living in the conditions that harm their health and safety and many do not have shelter that is a basic human need for survival. While i believe that government can do a lot to give shelter for homeless people, i also support that people should create solutions to mitigate this important challenge.
Admittedly, due to lack of shelter the higher authorities has a greater stress on them as they have to carry out strategies and social programmes. Firstly, To avoid starvation and homelessness government needs to raise awareness among people to cut the population of the nation as the scarcity of natural resources is the big cause of growing population. More clearly, if the population would be less than demands for shelter would go down up-to some extent. Secondly, unemployment could be a major problem that leads poverty issue among people as people becomes homeless when they can not afford housing expenditure . So, government should provide house loan to the people who are even living in streets and do not have place to live, si that they can buy house for livelihood that would enhance their safety. Finally, training and education are also important to cure this significant social issue as if people will be educated then they can manage their expenses by pursuing better jobs as well as they can get a better employment elsewhere. Most importantly, division of land can be done equally by the government and not society.
On the other hand, I also think that society plays an important role in providing homes to people living under poverty line. Firstly, everyone in the society men,women, children and older people, the major issue they face in the community is homelessness. So, society can remove this chronic homelessness by providing low-income and affordable housing for the poor population. Besides this, youngsters need financial help so by providing good education facilities community can make them able to get employment and to earn bread and butter. Most importantly, they can not only meet expenses but also find space for living. Last but not least, the people who are living in areas of earthquakes and floods becomes homeless because of these natural disasters. However, now society has changed its attitude towards these people and provide them aid when they face these problems.
To conclude, Although government can apply some measures to curb the big issue of homelessness yet i think that community can put forward the hands to support poor people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to house'.
Suggestion: to house
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , women
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06839622642 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6867209018 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51179245283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8514426585 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.411764706 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211618694609 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689125510428 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443940838636 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136093509514 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449825041964 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.