Environmental pollution is a reality that affects all people on the planet. In order for further pollution to be prevented, competent measures should be asserted. I fully agree that governments and large companies are the only two entities able to make sophisticated decisions and take the necessary steps towards the protection of the environment.
Individuals are not educated enough with respect to the various factors which affect our environment. Due to the fact that pollution is a complex matter people need to spend a great amount of time to become familiar with this particular concept and, hence, be able to make decisions that protect our natural resources. For that reason, it is imperative for a country's central administration to inform with the help of its specialized scientific personnel the general public regarding the possible environmental threats and the steps to be adopted.
Furthermore, protecting the environment requires serious funding. For example, manufacturing eco-free technologies in cars to release less air pollution or developing alternative forms of energy, such as wind energy, can cost a lot of money. Individuals do not have the necessary resources to spend. However, the same thing cannot be said for large enterprises, which make multimillion revenues on an annual basis. Incentives should be offered by the state to these companies (e.g. possible tax exemption), in order to invest in more friendly for environmental technologies.
To conclude, I absolutely agree that individuals are not able to do anything to improve the environment. On the one hand, governments should through their scientific staff update individuals on the required day to day steps for the protection of the environment, and on the other hand, big companies should be given the motivation to invest in the environment, and as a result, protect it.
- The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time excluding email Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005 Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea and make comparisons where appropriate 78
- The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000 2005 and 2010 about one university 79
- Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely Others think this is a waste of financial resources Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities Derby and Nottingham Between 2000 and 2009 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ts specialized scientific personnel the general public regarding the possible environmental th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, for example, such as, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38907849829 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17008815867 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4369013578 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150205336756 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589312660697 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455961431611 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960673934798 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295271888717 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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