Nowadays, human are making extreme effects on the world’s ecosystem result in the extinction of many species and the loss of bio-diversity. This essay will look at some major causes of this and offer some possible sollutions to the problem.
There are a number of reasons for the disappearance of some species and losing of the Earth’s bio-diversity. The first reason is too much pollution from vehicles, factories,… These release a large amount of CO2 to the atmosphere, which is the reason for global warming and climate changing, many species can not adapt to these changes, so they gradually die and disappear. The other reason is people are now destroy animal’s habitat to make way for roads, houses, or other facilities. An animal obviously can not survive without its habitat, leading to their extinction and at the end, losing of bio-diversity. As a consequence, human beings are directly or indirectly affect strongly to animals’s survival and ecosystem’s diversity.
There are several action that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. Firsly, we have to reduce the effects of global warming and climate changing in animals. Some solutions are adviced by scientists are planting more trees to help decrease in the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere, using eco-transport like some run by electricity instead of gasoline. Secondly, educate people about the disavantage of loss of bio-diversity to raise their awareness so that they will limit themselves not to cause detrimental effects in the future.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to many species’s disappearance and also lost in bio-diversity and measures can be implemented to tackle these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... much pollution from vehicles, factories,… These release a large amount of CO2 to ...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...ear. The other reason is people are now destroy animal’s habitat to make way for roads,...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun action seems to be countable; consider using: 'several actions'.
Suggestion: several actions
...l and ecosystem’s diversity. There are several action that could be taken to mitigate the pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31734317343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05034618778 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.963319879 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251842085471 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898263461855 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874135800529 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160232335277 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417263012191 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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