Nowadays, traveling overseas is easier and more affordable that ever before. This essay will argue that the advantages of this international traveling outweigh drawbacks. The essay will first demonstrate how travellers improve their English language skills, followed by an evidence of positive impact in mental health.
Undoubtedly English is the most common taught and used language in the world. English is everywhere and its an essential part of every traveler. Cabin crew give a safety instructions in English as well as tourist guides run their tours in English. Learning English is one part of the process, however, use it in real world is challenging to whom are not mother language. Travelling to foreign country encourage travellers to read, listen and speak in English. This will benefit them in their carrier as being bilingual open new carrier opportunities. For instance, in The Czech republic, many international companies opened their branches and seeking local workforce. However, in this post communist country, majority of society speak English fluently. Affordable airfares might help Czech population to improve their language skills while travelling.
Secondly, in the past, traveling overseas have been unaffordable to majority of population and as its generally known, people looking for adventures and exploring of new countries. Giving opportunity to not only young generation to travel to before untouchable destinations have a positive impact to mental health. Without any doubts, happiness is one of the essential part in our life and in this modern and stressful era, escape to exotic destination boost it. For example, labours in Germany have mandatory vacation every 3 months for 7 days and employer provides them 300 Euros allowance. Since 2000, when this practice become valid, number of suicides rapidly decreased.
To sum up, international tourism brings wide range of advantages, such as bilingual ability or happiness. It is a positive impact to modern society in this hectic lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51602564103 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88888395002 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0583919265 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5789473684 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171608753189 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555758542322 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806955903149 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11783765971 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919626513578 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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