Despite the fact, people nowadays are suffered from a hectic life schedule, they like to travel to different serene locations to get relief from such pressure. Due to this tourism is a flourishing industry and they commute to different countries. While it is possible to earn a lot of funds by investing in tourism, it is unlikely to ruin the local culture and customs. This essay will eventually discuss why commuters help to adhere to the country's economic status rather than affecting country originality
If any nation develops different visiting places then the economic status of a nation will go up. The main reason is that many folks nowadays are traveling to different countries and they spent lots of money when they are in a certain place. Take, for example, Thamel in Kathmandu valley is the most densely populated region of Nepal with visitors and restaurants and bars are flourishing. Also, Pokhara city of Nepal is also doing well with this industry. So due to these reasons the nation will step more to increase its income by making the promotion of tourism.
Conversely, there will be little impact on local culture however, they might be recognized by many people of the world. Due to technological progression, many site seekers will capture their customs on cameras which they might be published by media and other newspapers of the world. For instance, a documentary of the Gurung community was made by American tourist which got viral about one year ago in social media. So, due to tourism, they will be famous rather than disappearing
To recapitulate,it is increasingly likely that local traditions will be recognized by the world, Tourism will not hamper local culture and tradition and at the same moment, country will get flourished in monetary terms. Ultimately, I believe the all-round progression of any nation with this tourism industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09061488673 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73034842578 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585760517799 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7628872936 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136478865944 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526063803493 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682148754502 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914224533322 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449730273868 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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