It is believed that art such as poetry, music, painting and so on could be produced by any one. Others think differently saying that it acquires special abilities for a person to create art.
Discuss both views and reach a conclusion from your own perspective.
There are controversial statements on which art creations, such as collective poems, music, painting and so on, can be performed whether by the whole of people or merely by the person with special talent. This essay will discuss both sides of this topical debate and present my opinion to conclude.
On the one hand, those who support art production as achievable skill of whole people highlight that a set of artistic skills could be mastered by training process. Example could be seen on the objective of delivering satisfactory musical performance which could be learned a lot by musicians through playing on its instruments. Moreover, it might be said that a wealth of inspirational experiences could stimulate the practical skills of art, such as poetry and painting. For instance, only after learning through past experience can many people develop artistic creativity in composing epic poetry or spraying the real-life paints.
On the other hand, the proponents of art production as person’s special ability point out the fact in which less people could simply produce creative art as if they possess special ability. To clarify, there are particular people possessing an effortless command of the instrument in composing music and performing theatrical work. Finally, it is often said that artistic talent is required for person to create the great art due to the fact in many case that the time spent and uphill struggle do not represent the artistic achievement. This can be encountered in which many children can suddenly demonstrate the aesthetical-drawing skills, and many adults otherwise face practical difficulties to possess this skill.
To conclude, it is possible that art creation is produced merely by the use of specific skills. However, my cogitation would be that training process and inspirational experience are the key steps on behalf of creating art.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 515, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...r instance, only after learning through past experience can many people develop artistic creati...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ial ability point out the fact in which less people could simply produce creative ar...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
...create the great art due to the fact in many case that the time spent and uphill struggle...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to do'
Suggestion: to do
...that the time spent and uphill struggle do not represent the artistic achievement....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29666666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98168296996 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2609178961 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.416666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263036263841 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959566100728 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622923882119 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161334764086 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179848756528 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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