Usage of internet is an epicenter of discussion in multiple forums including social media It is generally thought that internet is an excellent means of interaction but some people believe that it may not to be best place to find information. This essay intends to throw light on both approaches before my rational opinion in conclusion.
To set the wheels in motion,there is a cascade of reasons which support that the internet is an excellent means of communication. The first one stems out from the fact that it is the best way to interact with people at for places. Another key justification upholding this nation is that some meeting and conferences can be done through the internet and cheap mode of communication.
In contrast,there are countless factors which substantiate that consider that it may not to be best place to find information the first and foremost is many people are create fake accounts on social networking sites and sometimes attack on personal account and id. for instance,one person has ten account id on Facebook and fake information is added in account. The most conspicuous one is that cyber crime is common in my country and most people are one to another person make fraud accounts on through the internet.
To recapitulate, after deliberating on all the aspects it seems unreasonable to suggest that according to me, usage of internet to get any kind of information.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9829787234 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0087724464 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548936170213 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1115288206 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.111111111 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340524377743 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121816514751 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136393901276 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199142210553 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150226907231 0.056905535591 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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