It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
People face many difficult choices in different stages of their lives. Deciding whether to take risks in both their professional and personal lives can be a challenging decision. However, I believe that taking risks can bring many opportunities, and the benefits of doing so outweigh any potential disadvantages.
One of the main disadvantages of taking risks is the possibility of failure. Risks often involve uncertainty and a lack of experience in analyzing the potential outcomes. For example, when a new technology becomes popular, many companies may try to use it in different fields to explore potential markets. However, the market may be unpredictable, and many companies may fail and suffer significant losses in terms of economic and labor resources. While failure is an inevitable part of life, it is important to remember that taking risks can also help us develop resilience and mental toughness.
On the other hand, taking risks can lead to new opportunities and experiences. It can also help people to grow and develop new skills. For example, if someone is unhappy in their current job, taking the risk of quitting and looking for a new job may lead to finding a job that is more fulfilling and rewarding. In personal life, taking risks can also lead to new experiences and help people learn more about themselves. For example, trying a new hobby or traveling to a new place can be exciting and rewarding.
In conclusion, while taking risks can be daunting, I believe that the potential benefits of doing so outweigh any potential disadvantages. Taking risks can lead to new opportunities and experiences, as well as personal growth and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13919413919 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05236580888 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7362524157 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356023365894 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134898708098 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10056684781 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240942741973 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093596652391 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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