In today's era it is vital for tourist's and businessman to learn information about new cultures. This essay will examines both advantages and disadvantages about this concern.
The main pros of gathering information about the different cultures before traveling is travellers face less problems. For instance, before traveling to holy places like Golden temple in Punjab, India. Travellers get to know about sikh community, their rules and regulations of covering the head with cloth called 'rumala' to respect the holy gurus and many more such things enhances knowledge of tourist's. As a result, they get aware of local community and face less issues while, communicating to local people. Secondly, business ventures bears a lots of time and fortune in establishing a little homework or planning before its setup won't heart to earn considerable profits. For example, mnc's in India were not accepted by Indians because they were using beef which was made by flesh of cow and Indians treat cow as goddess that's why, lots of restuarants were slaughtered until they respected vegetarianism. Travellers and businessmen must study culture as cultural exchanges offer enormous benefits to the nations involved.
The cons of not studing cultural differences can handicap organizations and built disputs among communities. In particular, business is successful if its manpower is happy and that can only happen by respecting their heritage by providing them bonus as small zesture on their respective festivals like diwali in India and if organizations in Zambia or other are not concerned about such things they will surly loose with time. Culture builds relation without being judged for race and religion, a little misunderstanding within people can even increase tension between different communities because the background of any community can act as mirror to reflect the natural personality and behavior of people.
In conclusion, there are scores of benefits and drawbacks of knowing or not being aware of different cultures. Certainly, when we know impulsive things we can tackle differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: examine
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Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46012269939 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91734402448 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622699386503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3096872445 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116764921275 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038609658343 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297452015016 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056147368113 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404218782623 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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