It is true that the highest position was occupied with aged people. However, young need to play a role as a leader in the company. Whilst, I believe, a senior citizen in authority position has some benefits in several cases, I presume that society needs the youth workforce to have a broader horizon on the future.
On one hand, some people claim that most famous and stressful companies have administered with the suitcase of experience. It is undeniable truth, the experience is the key to finding any solution. Old leaders have a rich source of that. Moreover, the aged person has better logical thinking abilities who can make the right decision. Especially, in crunch time when the company has a short period of doing something or criticize the situation. Use such a person, it has golden value for every company. Besides, older people are often more respected by others. Therefore, they can have a more powerful voice within the company, and people are more likely to listen to them. If leaders are young, they might find it hard to influence other employees.
On the other hand, some people presume that young leaders having many benefits in some cases. They advocate for these theories young people have better mental fortitude in contrast with elderly people. In addition, younger members have updated knowledge in many aspects. Due to, power of the youth, they could burden harsh situations and stress.
In conclusion, it is my conviction that young and old authority has both desired and adverse effects on the company.
- the diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. 56
- today more attention is paid to men sports the women what are the cause? is it a positive or negative development? 73
- Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do u agree or disagree? 61
- Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dated knowledge in many aspects. Due to, power of the youth, they could burden ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49453671852 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.246796552 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5882352941 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186288334467 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565467967742 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478959161197 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963339743672 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627495817784 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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