Age and experience really matters in order to regulates a better organization. It is commonly believed that managers and directors in a company are mostly older people and some suggests that they could be younger. Personally, i agree with this Statement to some degree. Some arguments support my view in this essay.
It is indisputable that older people have more experience than the younger generation because they are doing that particular work from number of certain years. Due to which they got perfection in their work , and in their duties. Second point is that they are pretty confident about their knowledge as it has been accumulated by years of experience.
Although older people have much experience than youngsters , they might not efficient and do not have the potential , youngsters have. Second important point to be considered is that new generation has ability of creativity and proficiency. In other words, they are able to create new methods of development and profitable sources which would be beneficial for that organization. Another valid reason is that adolescents have 40-50% more energy than the older people, as a result they do their assesments quickly with proper accuracy.
To summarise, it is an irrefutable fact that older people have much wider range of experience and knowledge. Nevertheless, youth also have much capability to provide better output to the organisation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nevertheless, really, second, so, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90901041491 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7014245651 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209418781797 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746469027588 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090194009069 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132518069844 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611769998243 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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