life now is better than it was 100 years ago.
the discussion that weather or not life style is not good in fewer thing rather than 10 decade before is a debatable one. I deem that, the people of past were become very healthy as compared to today's people.
To commence with, the people of past were very heathier than today. So, they were lived long life about 80-90 years. While,today's people were live only 50-60 years because of food quality. Nowadays,people prefer more fast-food and junk-food. So, that's why, the ability to live is allevaite.In the past,people prefered more home-made food. Secondly,the cost of living was very less as compared to today's life. Past people were not more jealous,envy but today"s people more jealous.Thus,people of past were life living more comfortable than today's life.
In addition to that, the people of past spent most of their quality time with their family member. They did not have more requirement so, they were free to spent time. While, mowadays, people migrate one place to another place for attaining handsome amount of money. So, they cannot spend valuable time with their family.
It is accepted that,we can never deny today's life and technology because people have all modern and basic amenities rather than past such as health education, hospitals, schools and so many.
To encapsulate,people were satisfied, what they have and no need more requirement.So, they lived a very comfortable than today.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242857142857 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.128571428571 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125 0.0946595960268 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0857142857143 0.0501214627716 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0428571428571 0.0437548338989 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110714285714 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.025 0.0403226058552 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84056824902 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0464285714286 0.0861772015684 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00714285714286 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00714285714286 0.011925033212 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1410.0 1933.35771543 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 316.048096192 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13043478261 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339130434783 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208695652174 0.28420135186 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152173913043 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108695652174 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84056824902 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.037074148 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 56.6669340574 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3333333333 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2626014101 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 127.492653851 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7743622355 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.99599198397 350% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 36.2028985507 49.1944974215 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.47222222222 1.69124875643 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118448987304 0.332605444948 36% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122758772201 0.102741220458 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0890248786929 0.0668466124924 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561298895336 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204692181797 0.148594505496 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478856203977 0.134430193775 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489382844384 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.21154168736 0.324371583561 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115790857715 0.0638462369009 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748168030597 0.228012699653 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481929449579 0.058150111329 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.