City life affects badly on physical wellbeing of residents. I personally agree with this view point because those people are more vulnerable to develop metabolic diseases and respiratory diseases as a result of their sedentary life style and the presence of polluted air respectively.
Over the past few decades, the way city people live has largely changed in an unhealthy manner leading to huge number of health issues. For example, they tend to consume more junk food, which are rich in calories and lack of fibers, on account of convenience. In addition to higher rates of fast food consumption, city dwellers do not take part in adequate physical exercise largely due to their hectic work schedule. Therefore, high calorie intake and inadequate physical exercise both result in obesity, which in turn gives rise to metabolic diseases such as diabetes, hypertension, ischemic heart disease and cerebro vascular accidents.
Moreover, residents of cities have long been suffering from mild to severe breathing problems, which are certainly associated with higher levels of air pollution. Unfortunately, it is on the rise as a result of releasing toxic gases from growing number of large factories and motor vehicles on the roads. Inhalation of dirty air causes fatal lung diseases such as bronchial asthma, bronchiectasis, pulmonary edema and lung carcinomas. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claim that 15% of 40-50-year old city people develop lung malignancy as compared to 1% of those live in rural areas.
In conclusion, living in a city probably risks one’s physical fitness. Various respiratory illnesses and life threatening metabolic problems are more common among city people as a result of breathing dirty air and practicing unhealthy habits.
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- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unhealthy manner" with adverb for "unhealthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ay city people live has largely changed in an unhealthy manner leading to huge number of health issues...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ong city people as a result of breathing dirty air and practicing unhealthy habit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37894736842 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85620069767 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624561403509 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4426575832 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166901899705 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061272774263 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480082754301 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100999669194 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218351477513 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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