Sometimes people have to move to other country which uses different language from their own native language. Some people believe that this can be socially and practically problematic for people who live in those countries. I personally agree with this statement where settling in a nation where we have to use foreign language can cause problems.
Firstly, this is because language serves as a communication bridge, where people communicate one another using a language. Hence, if one fails to master a country's native language, he will experience social problem, where he becomes an outsider in his social circle. For example, an Italia citizen moves to Taiwan , a place where Chinese language becomes its native language. Because he can only speaks Italian, he can barely talk to his neighbors and other employees. As a result, he experiences significant social problems where he feels left behind and isolated.
Secondly, this is because language is used to convey a message. Thus, if a person does not understand that language, he will fail to receive the message. For instance, Taiwanese government uses Chinese language to tell about street directions and guidance in using public facilities. But, because a person does not understand Chinese language, he fails to understand the message that the Taiwanese government wants to convey. As a consequence, he experiences practical problems where he finds difficulty in using public facilities.
In conclusion, I completely agree that residing in a country where we have to use foreign language can cause social and practical problems because language serves as a communication bridge, and language is used to convey a message.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ample, an Italia citizen moves to Taiwan , a place where Chinese language becomes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35338345865 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88346219816 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3175151742 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313965848722 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11685455923 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101166739463 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23580482682 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11450270525 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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