It is argued by some people that language differences can create social and practical complications, for those who move out abroad to either study or perform a job. Although this is true, but these complexities will turn into ease by the time.
To start with, there are various social difficulties, which one will have to face while relocating new countries such as making friends, though in the beginning it will not be a piece of cake to anyone due to trust issues, but as time will pass one will come to know about that whom they should choose as a friend. beside this, people may feel home sick, and this can be a cause distraction from work and study. Apart from customs and traditional variances may lead to cultural shock for many individual, though it will not be easy to adopt instantly in that way ,but slowly and gradually they will learn to cope up with same culture.
On the other hand, while considering the practical issues, having hard to fitting in will be the enormous problem for many individuals, for example one who lived most of his life in tropical condition and sudden move to harsh and bitterly cold place can be abstruse task to do to, but this is not long term issue for people, because adoptative nature of human body would lead to resistance to that particular climatic condition after sometimes. Whereas linguistic barrier is another colossal obstacle which one could face while living in the abroad. But humans are known to be be best learner at this planet for them learning a language is not big deal, for example many Indians, Bangladeshis, Pakistanis go to middle east countries, where Arabic is the spoken language in the starting they face difficulties in communicating but after one or two years they learn to communicate fluently.
To conclude, living in overseas is sometimes full of bewilderment, but adoptative nature of humans could turn this in to happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82121212121 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62510483415 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.239890758 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.777777778 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129506593931 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501511811323 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380689041689 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729575438756 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300230060226 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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