It is an evident that, when an individual shifted from their native land to overseas country they have to follow foreign language which can create problems not only in social but also in practical aspects as well. I fully agree with this notion since introducing to unfamiliar places may lack in degree of confidence and create vast problem to survive.
Firstly, the personnel who is trying to live his/her life in abroad may not be familiar with langauage which is mandatory to speak during their daily routine. Furthermore, even if well-educated individuals can lack on lingustic, pronunciation and tone accent due to convict of contact with native users as a result effects can be seen in academic field. As a paradigm, due to the fear of chances of mistake, novice person hesitated to share their ideas in front of congestion of mass.
Finally, peers have neither impressive command of languages in terms of fluency nor speak accurately as a result created an environment of embarrassment that can reduced self confidence. Sometimes its effect is too much intensive as a consequence suffered with psychological problems. Additionally, despite of hard work to overcome from language complexity, if not possible they become isolated and totally restricted themselves to speak infront of people.
In conclusion, entire people have nightmare to live in foreign country. However, its detrimental impact on social and practical life cannot be neglected. It is necessity to know basic prerequisites of languages and many more things of the destination. To overcome from such obstacles it is compulsory to enroll for training programme of languages of respective destination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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...of contact with native users as a result consequences seen in academic field. As ...
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3306122449 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13533156779 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9925621542 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276287565168 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893420820089 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728780406166 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123636449664 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759093223706 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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