In the present age, many regions of the world depend heavily on tourism as a source of revenue while tourism can cause problems providing that it is not properly handled. Although this phenomenon might be disadvantageous to some extent, it would be far more significant.
On the one hand, growing tourism would create employment opportunities for local residents. In order to meet travelers’ demand, local entrepreneurs need to hire a huge amount of employees working in travel agencies, airlines, tour operators, ticketing offices, logistics, and hotel management . These job opportunities substantially help to tackle unemployment problem and contribute to the national economy. To exemplify this point, The Thai tourism industry, ranked in second best tourist destination in Asia, generated 6.2 millions jobs according to the annual report in 2016. It, nowadays, remains one of the most essential sectors for Thailand in achieving economic growth and creating employment. Without developing such industry, there are more workers who could experience unemployment.
Admittedly, on the other hand, travel industry might pose a threat to environmental pollution. Some groups of holidaymakers throw bottles and plastic bags into the environment when traveling, which can have detrimental effects on local residents and wildlife. For example, Phu Quoc Island, known as “pearl island” in VietNam, is facing a trash crisis from a flock of people who lack awareness. However, the government enforces laws to protect the environment such as increasing the fine for throwing garbage. In VietNam, for example, if people discharge garbage in the wrong place, they will be fined up to one million VietNam dong.
In conclusion, for all the aforementioned reasons, I would believe that the positives of tourism outweigh its negatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61510791367 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08609435471 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690647482014 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9678719753 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183285911742 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534223374929 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805328727893 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12404337513 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107022389449 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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