Nowadays, tourism has become one of the main contributors to the revenue of several countries. Despite the various benefits that tourism provides, there are also a few drawbacks. However, from my perspective, I strongly believe that the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss the negative and positive aspects of tourism.
There are two main drawbacks gained from this issue. First and foremost, it is true that tourism can adversely affect the natural environment . To illustrate, many visitors discharge garbage, plastic bottles, and other waste products into the environment such as streets, tourist places, and especially on the rivers and beaches. This can lead to the pollution of water or air and damage to the environment of local dwellers’ lives. Furthermore, it has been shown that the more tourists with a lot of money and carry something extravagant such as jewelry, and smartphones, the more the rate of crime increases, for example, robbery, bag-snatchers, and pickpockets.
On the other hand, I believe that tourism provides more benefits. Firstly, it helps to boost a country’s economy. For instance, tourists will have to spend a huge amount of money on their accommodation, transport, and food. Thus, the government generates a significant portion of revenue through tourism. Additionally, tourism also contributes to creating job opportunities in the service industry including hotels, amusement parks, transportation, restaurants, and other services for locals.
In conclusion, the tourism industry has some downsides like affecting the environment, but it does not overshadow the beneficial impacts on the economy of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...adversely affect the natural environment . To illustrate, many visitors discharge ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61176470588 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17283458007 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.332249989 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205177633901 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681786282024 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528134037357 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120652652217 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504713518762 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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