It is undeniably true that the crime rate has been rapidly increasing and of late, it has been a prevailing concern in a significant part of the world. While few experts believe that this issue would grow up further in the coming decades, few exports are providing a way out solutions. Although there are plenty of negative consequences associated with felonies, governments can take steps to diminish these effects.
To embark upon, there are a plethora of reasons for increased misdeeds. First and foremost would be unemployment, because of not having enough jobs and no income citizens have been forced to commit crimes such as pickpocketing, burgling for their livelihood. In addition to it, excessive usage of illegal drugs contributed heavily to serious violations for instance rape, murder around the globe. Furthermore, the lack of either counseling or serious punishments for inmates in prisons has contributed heavily to it. As a result of this, paroled convicts are committing misdeeds yet again.
Authorities can come up with several solutions in order to reduce the felony rate. Firstly they should not only create new jobs but also increase minimum wages by amending labor laws; this would eventually improve the economic status of citizens. Secondly, governments should focus on reforming laws by imposing severe punishments even for small crimes. Therefore, it would assist in reducing the number of offenses. Finally, a new sophisticated monitoring system can be designed by leveraging technological advancements and CCTV cameras.
To conclude, despite the increasing number of offenses for several reasons for example poverty and lack of education, the regime can still address this issue by creating new employment opportunities, strict laws. This trend would increase further otherwise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48571428571 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92714250854 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9470226336 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13023970593 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415293226163 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322694123275 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800406911638 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145973369204 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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