In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...h leads to lots of serious heath issues.I myself think that there are numerous ca...
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...ge commercials which still influences us,adult persons.For instance,thousands of exqui...
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...which still influences us,adult persons.For instance,thousands of exquisite food co...
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...influences us,adult persons.For instance,thousands of exquisite food commercials are being...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 377.0 1615.20841683 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 64.0 315.596192385 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.890625 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.82842712475 4.20363070211 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37206903983 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.8125 0.561755894193 145% => OK
syllable_count: 111.6 506.74238477 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => OK
Sentence length SD: 6.5 49.4020404114 13% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 188.5 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0585944544537 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456728485167 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267679707337 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456728485167 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267679707337 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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