Bad behaviour of students are main problems that many school are facing. This essay will discuss the reasons behind negative behaviour of some student and some measures that governments, schools and parents can take to tackle this issue.
One of the most important cause affecting student behaviour is the lack of care and guidance from parents. Nowadays, many parents are busy with their works and they do not have enough time and skills to teach their children. Besides, some people believe that schools have responsible for student education, while there are too students that teachers cannot take care of all of them. Moreover, TV and Internet are main entertainments of modern students so they influence of the things that shown in social media and the Internet. However, many programs are not suitable for children such as those films have a lot of violent scenes, even there are websites that encourage children to commit suicide.
Those problems will be solved successfully if parents spend a lot of time on their children. Therefore, they will understand their children’s strengths and weaknesses and give appropriate orientations. Furthermore, Government should monitor and manage the content of websites and social media. This is because Internet affects student psychology while parents and schools do not control all time students use computer.
In conclusion, the development of students are important to family and social, so parents and schools need to take care of behaviour of students. Therefore, schools should coordinate with parents in terms of making discipline the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many schools
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rms of making discipline the children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39285714286 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75419410354 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1581629563 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216935491966 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839174684096 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632661488561 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145827608523 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548752858422 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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