It goes without saying that humans do not feel hesitation to suplurge exorbitant amount on redundant things just to manifest their opulence and high status. Therefore, it has been observed that expenses on marriages has been burgeon dramatically than ancient period. Here, in this essay I will elaborate root factors of this phenomenon as well as its destructive impacts in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the reasons, first and foremost weddings are considered as a platform to show power and richness. The reason is that people get Fame and satisfaction when others praise their expensive arrangements. Moreover, dowry is the prominent cause for this criteria. For instance, in India groom always demands for huge welcome and great decoration all over the ceremony place to feel proud among his kith and kins. Apart from this, inflation also plays a pivital role in this criteria. In past, everything was cheap and of superior quality as well as easily available while now prices of every product on its acme and qualities too low. So, pure things costs massive amount.
Moving to the impacts of this trend,that extravagant weddings produce burden on the father of the bride. To illustrate, to get wonderful gifts and money groom's parents threat bride's parents that if they do not fulfill their desires then marriage will not happen. Consequently, bride parents get depressed and sometimes commit suicide. Furthermore, it affect Society at a great extent by virtue of people observe everyone and try to imitate their style. To exemplify, recently Mukesh Ambani a great entrepreneur of India, disbursed 700 crores on the marriage of his daughter which excite others to do so. As a consequence, wasting of money escalated without any positive outcomes.
To conclude from above confabulation it is axiomatic, that unnecessary expenses on marriages affect society and individuals which extirpate archiac trends and sometimes and enhance chaos in wedding atmosphere and stipulate deadly repercussions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35646687697 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81098576582 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652996845426 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9741135503 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8823529412 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695999147274 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212336396356 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232876676321 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416046207389 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178748863573 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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