Majority of youngsters move from villages to urban areas for the purpose of doing work or studying. The reason behind this phenomenon can be the availability of more job opportunities and educational institutions in the cities as compared to the rural areas. Although this trend is advantageous as people can avail various facilities in the cities, it has downsides since it leads to an increase in population.
The prominent reason for the migration of the youth is that there are fewer jobs in the countryside as agriculture is the main occupation there. However, in the cities, industries and factories are installed where a large number of people can get employment. Besides this, in rural areas, there are not colleges and universities to attain higher education due to which to pursue graduation or post-graduation, they move to metropolitan areas.
The major advantage of living in the cities is that people can enjoy multifarious facilities like transportation, banking, gym, parks, markets
hospitals etc. Hence, People live a comfortable and convenient life. On the flip side, due to the movement of you to the cities, cities become overcrowded which leads to more consumption of resources and it results in the scarcity of resources.
To encapsulate, it can be concluded that innumerable employment opportunities in the urban regions attract the youth. Notwithstanding, it is beneficial in terms of providing facilities, but it arises problem of distribution of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29938885776 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0651384979 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.545454545 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142014271986 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047436289416 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361172933989 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699392108229 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467180483885 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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