In many government like to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However some think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both side and give your opinion.
It is argued that government is spending a lot of assist on the arts while opponent says that it should be spend on health and education. In this essay will discuss both sides of the essay.
On one hand, art which represent the culture and society of a country in different platforms around the globe. Thus, it can be a source of peace and act as an ambassador indirectly because it will represent the country with the rhyming words. Furthermore, we can’t deny our generation talent nor we can spoil their talents just like, every other fields, art also need attention which prosper a country by attracting people to themselves. For instance, if a singer sings mesmerizingly so, a lot of fans around the world will adore to meet him which will help in the boosting of economy as well as, it will create a good impression on foreigners.
In contrast, government is responsible to provide basic needs to their people like education and hospitals. They should build a hospitals which can help to overcome diseases and they should also construct a schools, colleges and universities. Additionally, they should provide free education for poor who cannot afford high fesses and provide them funds for the daily lives. If, an individual has basic needs he will have more opportunities to something for his country.
In conclusion, I viewed both the opinions spending money on arts and health and education but health and education is important for a country. I feel that, different public sectors can promote arts so, government should pay much attention on health and education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assist seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of assists'.
Suggestion: a lot of assists
...t is argued that government is spending a lot of assist on the arts while opponent says that it...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...s while opponent says that it should be spend on health and education. In this essay ...
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Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...create a good impression on foreigners. In contrast, government is responsible t...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hospital' or simply 'hospitals'?
Suggestion: a hospital; hospitals
...cation and hospitals. They should build a hospitals which can help to overcome diseases and...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a school' or simply 'schools'?
Suggestion: a school; schools
...diseases and they should also construct a schools, colleges and universities. Additionall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76105745956 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6211223129 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247940105142 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945695088027 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855240169808 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177935082447 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104051569923 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.