Every country always has a dream to be an enormity. Some politician argues that the criteria to become sophisticated country are freshwater prevail to the inhabitant, energy can be distributed in their region, and the country has the capability to supply food by itself. This category can be achieved when the economic is remain stable. However, there are several arguments that aren't just focused on the economy but other capabilities which shall be taken to support the improvement of the country.
To begin with, the highest level of the economy can prove that the country is convenience. The surplus has happened while the income is higher than the expense so that the country has managed the inflation of its Kurs. For example, since the year of 2000, Indonesia enlarges the income up to 5% per year so that the value of its Kurs (rupiah) is expensive than other countries Kurs. Others example, Venezuela has a crisis in economic because many people in the country have been fired in term of the fallen of the oil price.
On the other hand, there are several consents for the country to support economic progress. Firstly, the most important thing is educated people. In Findlandia, many children have good education background from elementary to university school. This country has useful human resources. This is why this country is classified to be a developed country. Secondly, the criteria of advancement country are that people live in peace where the number of crimes can be controlled by either the government or the defense system.
In conclusion, the biggest country can be valued by the growth of the economy. But, the highest economy will not achievable if the other component such as education and criminal can't be managed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...ry can be achieved when the economic is remain stable. However, there are several argu...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...wever, there are several arguments that arent just focused on the economy but other c...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...omponent such as education and criminal cant be managed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0206185567 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64755613742 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4670028908 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135125367022 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495323085074 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637208678437 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782684451117 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056287792959 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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