In modern days, one of the controversial thinks related to whatever a priority purpose of governments is the growth of economic but some people, including me, tend to strongly believe that other progressions are fundamental for the prosperity of a country. In this essay, I will consider the benefit of the development of the economy and then secondly how economic forces depend on another type of progress.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that economic progress maybe defines the development of a nation. The primary reason for believing this is that countries that lead to economic forces tend to wealth for any branch of prosperity. One important illustration of this is the research of economy in 2017 had shown that the top 10 development countries coincided on the top 10 countries in terms of the amount of budget, which means that improvement of countries related to their economy.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is argued that to improve the economy, education, health and other sectors must have developed. In other words, citizens who have knowledge of the economy establish new economic progress, which is absolutely true. A particularly good example is here previously research of economy in 2017 also reveals that levels of the prosperity of countries directly associated with all sectors of progress. Generally, that research proved that the growth of the economy is not the most important aim for a country.
In conclusion, as we have seen, there are uneasy to discuss. On balance, however, I tend to believe that governments need to regard equally all branches of prosperity because the only economy maybe is not an essential task and developing sectors are similarly important to develop a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04745762712 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84025723999 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501694915254 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3819971824 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.083333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254688099218 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878356558792 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545469356949 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150670224496 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443615528205 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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