There is huge likelihood of those criminals being released from prison committing more illegal actions. Now the questions which may rise are what the main reasons for this are, and what steps can be taken to eliminate this problematic phenomenon.
A fundamental reason for criminals committing illegal actions once they are released from prison is the extremely inappropriate atmosphere of prison since there is a vast spectrum of criminals there who are living together. For example, a young person who commits a small crime is kept with a professional criminal who might have committed murder several times. As a result, the less experienced prisoners are stimulated further to conduct the crimes which have got hear about in prison. Another reason for this could be the lack of rehabilitation programs in prison. Such programs which are implemented in prison can have a key role in rooting out this problem but in most cases due to financial limitations the rehabilitation programs are ignored by authorities of prisons.
When it comes to solutions, one of the most influential remedies for this problem is to categorize different criminals based on the level of crimes which they have committed. It might lead to a healthier environment for those who are in prison for the first time. Moreover, conducting the rehabilitation and recovery programs by a professional team such as social worker, psychologist and occupational therapist could be considered as a primary solution in order to decrease the possibility of committing crime after their release for those who are being punished for the first time as these kinds of programs train prisoners and teach them how to interact with people peacefully and also how to adapt themselves with the society.
In conclusion, if we think deeply we will find out that the prison's atmosphere has a key role in stimulating criminals to continue their way once they are released. Thus, by making their environment healthier we might be successful in reducing prisoners' desire to live as offenders for rest of their lives.
- many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.why is this happening and what measures can be tackle this problem. 61
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 73
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more prons to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? 67
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prisons'' or 'prison's'?
Suggestion: prisons'; prison's
... think deeply we will find out that the prisons atmosphere has a key role in stimulatin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15773809524 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94946182252 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529761904762 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3498220639 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.416666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188683492881 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796035672732 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057120585147 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132126322798 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767141507514 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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