One primary course of this problem is family did not have enough time for children and the most viable solution to this problem is giving an information about children behavior much more.
The principal problem associated with parents gave the time not enough to their child are effected to learning development around kids or teenagers. They may decide to do the wrong way by themselves. If they did not get a correct advice from home. For example, one day some of friend suggest your child to steal something in supermarket. So your children accept to do without realize that is illegal.
To takje this problem, the government should launch a public campaign about spending time to children more than working. This could reduce the problem and help children society happy by standing on goodness. For instance, treat them while going to another places outside house, tell and explain about good thing when seeing around.
In conclusion, parents spend not enough time to children is a major problem for human especially teenage, but it can solved by educating people about sharing the time to take care of your kids before late.
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at l 90
- The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full time or part time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele 73
- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid? 73
- In some countries owning a home rather than rent one is very important for people Why might this be the case 56
- The charts provide information about people s travel in one country Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cide to do the wrong way by themselves. If they did not get a correct advice from ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'correct advice'.
Suggestion: correct advice
... way by themselves. If they did not get a correct advice from home. For example, one day some of...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...or human especially teenage, but it can solved by educating people about sharing the t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99473684211 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41062399251 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4672278665 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30732508241 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107008420491 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089067201165 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1861236915 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038939273403 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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