In this fast paced world,individuals have to spend enough time for travelling from work or school.However,some folks uphold it as a positive trend whilst other have reservation about it.From my point of view, this statement proper scrutinization before forming any opinion.
On the one hand,this statement has has some adverse effect.First and foremost,travelling a lot can create the atmosphere of stress and efficiency.hence, this trend may affect the health of the individuals.Moreover,commuting by cars and personal vehicles from far may eventually lead traffic problems and detrimental impact on environment as burning hefty sum of fuel is hazardous for the society.Furthermore, spending more time while travelling may affect the civilians mentally as people would get irritate and frustrate to following the same travelling daily routine.A recent survey of Times of India revealed,65 percent of workers are upset as they do not able to spend enough time with their families due to the wastage of time in travel to office.
Having said that, there is also an another side.People are travelling a lot as they want to save money as majority of people and students have their work places and schools in metropolitan cities and renting a house would be more expensive and unaffordable for middle class people. As a result, they prefer to travel more rather than paying rent.In addition,most of the individual commute more regularly due to their family member as they would be able to spend some time with their family members and share the everyday experience with them.To exemplify:- My father used to travel around 60 km everyday from home, merely to give few hours to our family.
To conclude, after gauging both the view,I opine that travel a lot may have some disadvantages but this trend help individual to maintain the balance between workplace and family member for the better foreseeable future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27540983607 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43033873904 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.674440443 49.4020404114 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.8 106.682146367 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281391772677 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146416665226 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219125139628 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160573715629 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290646422979 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.0946893788 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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