Many people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is sometimes argued that in modern society, a majority of global citizens are showing a lack of caring for the problems related to environmental protection. And in my opinion, I partly agree with the idea, as will now be explained.
On the one hand, I would contend that many individuals are ignoring environmental issues for several reasons. The first explanation is that traditional education mainly concentrates on subjects such as Mathematics, literature and score outcomes, not yet investing on educating students about the environment and its protection lessons. For example, the situation of indiscriminate littering, breaking branches, plucking leaves and not maintaining general hygiene is still very common among children, especially at small levels such as kindergartens and primary schools, high schools. As a result, they don’t have a deep understanding of the importance of the surroundings, leading to being careless with this. Another reason is that inhabitants who are residing in poverty areas have many worrying problems like social crimes, education, food products, accommodation, deforestation and so on. So they don't have enough concern as well as worry for the environment.
On the other hand, I think that people still are interested in environmental problems. Firstly, global warming has detrimental impacts on our lives, always broadcasting on social media anytime and anywhere. To be specific, this phenomenon occurs due to human activities, primarily fossil fuel burning, which increases heat-trapping greenhouse gas levels in Earth’s atmosphere. Therefore, when human rights are affected, they will act to protect it. Secondly, with technological advancement, there are a variety of environmentally friendly devices such as solar panels, vehicles using electric and LED light bulbs. In addition, renewable energy is clean energy such as wind power, solar power, tidal power and it generates no emissions. So, these devices and products are becoming prominent in the market.
In conclusion, although reasons can be given to support that humans are showing little concern for the environmental problems, I still believe that people care about the environment because the environment plays an important role in developing the country as well as individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 901, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ation, deforestation and so on. So they dont have enough concern as well as worry fo...
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Line 2, column 937, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...hey dont have enough concern as well as worry for the environment. On the other hand, I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64161849711 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18055146918 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650289017341 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0517369007 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150695002332 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449638638209 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381245406637 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886697690893 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017559745491 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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