As a child, people have a blast when taking up the sports at school or playing with fellows; however, there a shift when they have growed up that they hardly work out. This concern is may attributed to the daily pressure of hustle life and the common prejudice that physical exercise could cost a small fortune. This essay will discuss both the reasons and potential methods to combat the concern.
Adults are hestitated when it comes down to taking physical exercises since it is sustainably considered as a luxurious thing which only cater for wealthy class and may not fit in people's packed schechdule. Low income workers like factory workers or farmers could not afford such overly expensive gym course whose only purpose is making profit from their customers so it is reasonable when they avoid taking daily exercise. And people in their late 20 have been kept occupied by bread and butter work and childcare so their main concern is lifelihood rather than being healthy. For example, people returning home from work are too frustrated to take up exercise as they bear in mind that physical work out would make them unable to enjoy their leisure time through suffing the social media or watching films. Thus, mature people are not excited getting involved in physical excercise due to time insufficiency and costly price.
Some of the useful method that can be implemented to solve these issues can be adjusting the amount of time doing excercise into your daiy schedule and try out the free exercise lessons on Youtube. Nowadays, an abundance of video instructing how to do exercise are available and easily approached by media devices that offer people on a budget crunch the flexibility of time and chance to keep healthy. Moreover, busy people should spent at least 15 to 30 minutes per day to get exercise done if they desire to avoid chronic illnesses such as heartbroken, stroke, diabetes or have ideal body shape. For instance, spending 15 minutes on jogging in the vicinity or taking up the cardio heat exercise which is relatively time saving is appropriate and worth-considered to up-to-ears people. Those are some way to make people feel motivatedly egaging in exercise and always being fresh to get to work task.
To conclude, people is not enthusiastic to propose to work out because of the sum of money it can cost and busy schechdule; nonetheless, they can now rest assure with the help of diversed video sources on youtube and many variation of exercise that require less time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'attribute' or 'be attributed'?
Suggestion: attribute; be attributed
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...time insufficiency and costly price. Some of the useful method that can be implemented t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun variation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many variations'.
Suggestion: many variations
...f diversed video sources on youtube and many variation of exercise that require less time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91745283019 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5364280403 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587264150943 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2472902908 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.928571429 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261728717029 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917353981526 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413385183571 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146363939073 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454181703466 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.