Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there have been some controversies on home made foods, it is thought by some that cooking and eating at home is best for individuals and family, while others opined that eating I eateries is the best.
I am of the opinion that home made meals are exceptionally advisable for folks. In this essay I would give my views and reasons
One the one hand, health is wealth, and anyone who values health should be careful of what goes into the mouth. Moreso, the constituents of the condiments used in preparation of the food are not known to us, on which can not be trusted, it could be an allergy and thereafter could be detrimental to ones health when eating outside. Furthermore, research has shown that consistent eating outside the home has been a leading cause of obesity over time, cooking at home helps in calculations of calories taken.
On the other hand, eating outside the home could cause one to break down, this could be as a result of poor hygienic environment, poor cooking hygiene or even a person hygiene eventually leading to hospitalization. But when meal is prepared at home, individual is well conscious of wellness so every preparation could be done under sterility.
To add to it, amazingly, cooking at home saves cost and prevents excessive spending, a good home made meal is not up to a quarter of money spent in the restaurant, moreso, there is assurance of the product gotten, and constituents that helps in boosting immunity, stabilizing weight likewise the mood.
Lastly, cooking at home is of great benefits to individuals already diagnosed of of illness that requires a routine diet or a nutritional touch, conditions like kidney injury, liver failure, diabetes to mention a few
In conclusion, eating at home helps in calculations of calories,saves more money,helps us to boost immunity and makes one healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, lastly, likewise, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88492875791 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8486595391 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.444444444 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222389343149 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100122476866 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671284841455 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112756255103 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533730599668 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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