In modern scenario, unprecedented technological advancements have modernized the present generation. Numerous intellectual individuals consider that junk food entrepreneurs should not be permitted to display advertisements whereas others believe that the companies should have litigation support to display their products. According to my perception, advertisements play an indispensable role in promotion of particular product but owners should reveal the factual information for the betterment of customers.
Commencing the discussion, nowadays, companies make possible endeavours to promote the sale of the product without bothering about its impact on the customer. They manipulate the features of the product in order to attract the attention of the customers. Nowadays, juveniles are extremely vulnerable to the advertisements. For instance, enormous children get easily fascinated by the advertisements concerning eatables like chips, pizzas, cold drinks and snacks. Moreover, children get prone to consumption of such unhealthy and inorganic ingredients and later suffer various health related disorders.
Further elucidating my perspective, many individuals consider that governments should allow the companies to advertise their products. Company owners should ensure safety of the customers. They should reveal the factual information concerning the product. Moreover, they should refrain from exaggeration in order to increase the sales. For instance, many diabetes patients consume cold drinks and junk food and later suffer dire consequences due to artificial preservatives and spurious supplements in the product. Hence, companies should make all possible endeavours to acquaint the clients with the pros and cons of the particular product.
To recapitulate, advertisements are considered extremely essential for the promotion of particular product. But companies should also ensure the safety of the customers. They should abstain from creating misconceptions about the product for personal commercial gains. Customers health preservation should be the topmost priority of all the companies.
- Some people think that to be successful you need to get in university education whereas others say it is not true Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion 79
- Over the past fifty years international sports events such as the Olympic Games and world cup competitions have played an increasingly important role in our society However many people think such events are an enormous waste of money time and effort 78
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket in your letter Say who you are Give details about the accident Suggest how the supermarket could prevent si
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars 73
- These days children tend to spend a great deal of time playing computer games Some believe this is a beneficial trend while others think it is detrimental 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...er various health related disorders. Further elucidating my perspective, many indivi...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28178694158 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26393916165 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.265504575 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313383643142 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993651064909 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881477004892 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205418660568 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939563721464 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.85 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.