Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion including relevant examples.
Money has always been an option for gift for various ceremonies. Some believe money is the best gift for teenagers, while others disagree with this statement. I mostly agree with the statement; however, I will discuss both views and their reasons.
On the one hand, opponents of the proposed idea maintain that giving money to teenager may cause dangerous upshots. For example, they may buy drugs or waste their money for inappropriate goods. Furthermore, opponents state spending time for buying gift means that you care about him or her. People used to spend time for choosing a present but, nowadays, it is going to be like just sending money to the others without any love.
On the other hand, although wrapping off gifts has always been an enjoyable feeling, giving money as a gift has magnificent advantages. The most important benefit is that if teenagers get gift money, they could buy what they like or need the most. We all have experienced a situation that received a present which do not like or need. In addition, by giving money to teenagers, they would face different situations in the future. Personally, I mainly agree with the statement; however, it may not be the best choice in the all situations. Thus, I believe people should decide to buy gift or give money in different conditions.
In conclusion, both sides present their reasons to support their ideas. However, I reckon, the reasons provided by statement’s supporters are more persuasive than the others and I mostly agree with the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96484375 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64860745675 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1558967772 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244942881702 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864506051807 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617071559927 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141521267369 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677666424874 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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