Different regions from where successful individual hailed always have an influence over them; however only regions don’t make people triumphant, it requires uphill struggle, determination, focus and goal-directed approaches but still, the person always represents his region. In my opinion, both region and individual are complimentary to each other in several ways.
Every region has uniqueness in the form of culture, traditions, values and beliefs, so the offsprings hailed from such region have specialized characteristics in them and which stimulate them to acquire positive outcome in regard to education and career.
On the other hand, accomplished people also have a significant impact on the native area they belong to as they bring proud for the whole region and many adolescents also get motivated by them and initiate objective oriented behavior to attain their goals. They become role models for the youngsters and older people tell their stories of success to instill paramount qualities in their children and to catalyze the surge of fortitude.
In short, we can’t be detached from the area we born into because knowingly or unknowingly we gained a lot from it, and our every deed is going to represent our area as a whole in front of the world. Our activities also have a direct influence on our youngsters in that region, so we will always be accountable for our nation.
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- It is argue that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come in regard to education and career. On the other hand, accomplished people a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, in short, in my opinion, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26222222222 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90593262903 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0166954765 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.142857143 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1428571429 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288881247704 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130125207509 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080578456941 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166045523561 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879958757426 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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