Advancement in the new technology making the world too small, many people believe that the young generation nowadays is choosing work abroad. There are drawbacks to choose a foreign country for working in contrast with another hand there are advantages also, In my opinion in this essay I agree with advantages and I will illustrate you both the views.
Firstly, young adults in many countries after passing their university-level, start thinking about their independent life with good earning. In some countries, professional values are not good as compare to abroad, for instance, robotics is very much demanding jobs in Japan rather than India so, many youngsters choose Japan instead of India or another country, so they want to earn better, there are very flexible hours for working and its really help to a professional to take their family and due to less stress they perform excellently in their work.
Secondly, living abroad having their own disadvantage is that we are a very huge distance from our country, family friends, however, there is a change in the environment, may cause health effects and increase anxiety even stress to the brain, there is other factors also may causing negative effects for instance language and another country laws and many other factors.
Incapsulation, many people selecting abroad for there future betterment evolution there are both the aspect when they going abroad negative as well as positive but I personally believe that advantages are at the top because adjustment are evrywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are other factors'?
Suggestion: there are other factors
...rease anxiety even stress to the brain, there is other factors also may causing negative effects for i...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... aspect when they going abroad negative as well as positive but I personally believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24291497976 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71200066937 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.500394944 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.833333333 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.1666666667 20.7667163134 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 7.06120827912 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2946846565 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140339767127 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055181908302 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16566780904 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834955944315 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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