With the advancement of technology, people are more interested in spending a lot of money on holding a fashionable wedding ceremonies and parties, while it was totally opposite from the past decades. I will discuss the causes and detrimental effect on the society in the subsequent paragraph.
There are several causes which are responsible for arranging a extravagant wedding. To begin with, individuals have more expandable income because of improving in financial, social and economic sector, couples now creating a memorable and special wedding events by booking a luxurious venue. For instance, individuals have more curiosity to make a headline on news channel by inviting a celebrity or making a different cousins on wedding ceremonies which shows their higher status in the society. In addition, people have show off nature now and also feel proud by showing a wealthy nature in society.
Moreover, youngsters are mostly attracted by the culture of different nation and the celebration of celebrities. By planning a marriage in a different style, individuals earn a name and fame by putting a impression on friends and relatives.
On the other hand, the popularity of expensive wedding are raising among human beings but the negative impact upon society can not be neglected. Firstly, majority of parents take a loan from bank to make the special wedding day and incur more expenditure on arrangements. Consequently, they have to grapple with the debt for years to come and that will loss the joy of life. Secondly, married couple increased their debt by taking a new home on mortgage who are unable to pay such amount. Additionally, the true meaning of wędding will be lost when new couple feel more depressed because of installments. Thirdly, some couples are not wealthy and they borrow a large sum of money from financial institutions and recognise their in a exorbitant way which would create obstacle in future in payimg bills and childcare.
To sum up, expensive weddings are not more bensficial for society. Weddings should be simple and subtle which reduces the problems of poor individuals and individuals should be aware about the negative consequences of such weddings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cousin'?
Suggestion: cousin
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different style" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Consider replacing "in a exorbitant way" with adverb for "exorbitant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to, for instance, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23446327684 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91779468208 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8758089166 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0625 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861387711089 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282390323839 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315042041889 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490472576466 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179083918788 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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