The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourage people from doing activities which usually involve very little sick. Do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that advancement in technology has taken mammoth dimensions in all over the universe. Some living souls opine that publication of worthless news on televisions should be reduced because it is not encourage some folks to do things which are commonly consider as miserable. I strongly appreciate this view as debatable.
Due to the latest telecommunication, there is wild network of telecast available. As a result, news on the televisions are essential and frequent doing activity for many individuals. Firstly, it provides information from all over the world. For example, news based on the sports, crimes, politics, education, general knowledge and so on. Secondly, it keeps update from day to day life and surrounding. Lastly, it is rapid way to get aware from the world.
Along with those benefits, there are convincing things that should be focused by media. They show good news but sometimes with good ones there are bad news too. The news on media broadcast so rapidly and by this bad news known in whole society. Sometimes it would affect the children and encourage them to do so. While for some people, news are inspiration so they accept them if it is worthless also. Sometime it would became fake news due to lack of sources of details.
To put it in a nutshell, i personally believe that there is always some limit to do anything and across the limits it known as worthless. So telecast should aware about this and report every news as per requirement . However, news are important for every living souls.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...ons should be reduced because it is not encourage some folks to do things which are commo...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...e folks to do things which are commonly consider as miserable. I strongly appreciate thi...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... so they accept them if it is worthless also. Sometime it would became fake news due...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...it is worthless also. Sometime it would became fake news due to lack of sources of det...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and report every news as per requirement . However, news are important for every l...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216494845361 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.158075601375 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0893470790378 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0549828178694 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515463917526 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147766323024 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0343642611684 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7976532854 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274914089347 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0790378006873 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171821305842 0.021408717616 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00687285223368 0.011925033212 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1540.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92307692308 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330769230769 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253846153846 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138461538462 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7976532854 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.2763112492 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.4444444444 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7480090809 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 127.492653851 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 20.7743622355 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 39.8290598291 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.50649350649 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211492023945 0.332605444948 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.074644330537 0.102741220458 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0542564446406 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448688183659 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101810295428 0.148594505496 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740749267217 0.134430193775 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339879946104 0.0742795772207 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276914586405 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0519642094455 0.0638462369009 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138309225344 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280635429886 0.058150111329 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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