Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Equality between women and men in working environment has been prevalent worldwide. Some people believe that both genders have the identical performance in every field of jobs. However, I disagree with the statement, and this will explain why there are posts that men or women excel at.
At first glance, it is obvious that male workers are as intelligent as females, as well as mostly attending the same education. Therefore, theoretically, both should perform equally. However, it is natural difference and pursuits that change the equilibrium.
To start with, men were born having more muscular bodies, while women are more suitable for caring and education. In fact, several jobs are predominant for a certain sex, due to the difference. To give example, the majority of pre-college teachers are female, especially for kindergarten level. The same imbalance happens to financial-related positions, namely accountant, which require meticulous daily books examination. Meanwhile, men tend to prevail in strength-required roles, for instance guardians or police. Also, male pilot dominated frequently, as tasks are adventurous and risky.
Additionally, since each gender show interest in various areas, they accordingly have better knowledge in the respective industries. While men are rather technology-focused, most women tend to consume content relating to fashion. As a result, female automobile technicians are rarely seen, and male fashion designers are less common in many countries.
In conclusion, although both genders are able to work similarly, there should not be an equal gender distribution in every job. However, there are some advantages when having a both-gender position that employers need to discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71042471042 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18151403797 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679536679537 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9578079216 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120655603915 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347233865061 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044550801551 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626931411938 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415546785192 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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