In the modern age, advanced technology such as mobile phones and the internet have been integrated into the lives of people. However, we have to admit that elderly citizens are still less accessible to those technological tools despite the benefits they may bring. Some of the positive impacts of cellular phones and webs on old people will be discussed before feasible measures are recommended to encourage them to be more dependent on those technological innovations.
To commence with, mobile phones and the internet can facilitate long- distance communication, allowing the old inhabitants to connect with their offspring and their friends no matter where they are. My grandmother, for example, cay stay in touch with me through text- messaging or video calls even though she is living abroad now. This was never the case in the past when people rarely had a chance to meet up or communicate with anyone outside of their circle of community. In addition, internet is a tremendous source of reading materials, which would be heaven for elderly citizens who are in favor of reading habit. Just by a click to search on internet, the aged population can access a wide range of reading resources with various contents to keep abreast of the latest news or to entertain themselves when they are from work. Many digital publications are free or cost little. In deed, the availability of thousands of documents, provided domestically or internationally could bring users unlimited choices without the need to buying printed paper newspapers from different press agencies.
In order to encourage old people for using such facilities, companies should concentrate on developing easy to use web applications or the phones. For instance, they can develop the phones with big keypads and the internet apps that provide information in their local language. In this way, people can learn how to use them and hence, can enjoy them. Therefore, focusing on the development of products which are easily understood will encourage such people to use them in their daily life.
In conclusion, due to the complete advantages of technology on the aged citizens, organizations should make an attempt to develop products which can be handled by old generations. It is thus hoped that government will make some efforts to force industry to produce such products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Message: Did you mean 'need to buy'?
Suggestion: need to buy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16578947368 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85917268122 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9938429983 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356232274781 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994581377908 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805858893584 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197313523066 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976267038088 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.