With the Internet having a major influence to a person life's aspects in modern societies on shopping, work and communication, we can now live without face-to-face interaction with other people. A ever-changing world enables labour workforce to choose career path in several ways, this situation is a negative trend in the long run.
In this day and age, We can stay at home and have almost anything delivered homes as most consumer goods are widely available for online purchase. We also have more opportunities to allocate my chosen profession and spend more time for extracurricular activities or online courses in accordance with my schedule. Additonally, More astonishing websites, which go through such as Skype or Zalo, enable users to experience moments the best, or when it comes to personal relationship, we can use Facebook to keep in touch with relatives or add new counterparts all over the world.Also, Members of an organization nowadays rely on email and other platforms to maintain effective communication and ensure their business circulate smoothly. The Internet, without doubts, enhaces all of aspects, makes our workplaces more efficient, and facilitates our communcation with others.
However, we faced with some underlying consequences by our abusement on the Internet. We are very reliant and totally dependent on such technology. We are losing the connect directions with the surrouding relationships. Children hardly spend time gathering with parents because they are addictable in social media platforms.Simultaneously, Parents are busy with heavy workload and there would be an undeniable fact that a succesfull career path is the best solution to bring up their children.For these reasons, domestic's relationships can drift apart over time, more serious impacts happens that conflicts or arguments is just a matter of time.Furthermore, Giving rise to utilize the Internet can make a bad conditon with our health, it causes eye-sighted problems and a high sense of irritability. This is leading us toward a society where people will step by step in vitual interactions and undermines near future career.
The influence of the Internet on many aspects of our lives is dramatical. However, we have to distinguish between the beneficial impacts and the shortcomings to flourish on the basis of true communication
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- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct e g Dinosaur dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 89
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development f 84
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...-to-face interaction with other people. A ever-changing world enables labour work...
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Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...orld enables labour workforce to choose career path in several ways, this situation is...
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Line 2, column 577, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...add new counterparts all over the world.Also, Members of an organization nowadays r...
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Line 2, column 582, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew counterparts all over the world.Also, Members of an organization nowadays rely...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ilitates our communcation with others. However, we faced with some underlying c...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ndent on such technology. We are losing the connect directions with the surrouding relation...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Simultaneously
...re addictable in social media platforms.Simultaneously, Parents are busy with heavy workload a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...est solution to bring up their children.For these reasons, domestics relationships ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...s or arguments is just a matter of time.Furthermore, Giving rise to utilize the Internet ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42582417582 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31248397954 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.375172669 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.923076923 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258301057922 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910277549029 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876698063041 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168357394828 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102215298894 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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