The money spent on space research has brought enormous benefits to mankind, but it could be more usefully applied. How far do you agree?
It is self-explanatory that these days the money which is spent on space research has opened lots of doors in human’s lives but some people are skeptical that whether or not it is the most effective way for applying this amount of money.
On one hand, some people believe that making progress in all fields of science is one of the most prominent objectives of mankind and nothing is more vital than accomplishing these goals. They claim that doing research about space has led to launching some satellites and these equipment have brought enormous gains in humankind’s lives such as ...
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Thank you so much for your
Thank you so much for your attention. I used "necessitate" as a verb.("necessitate doing something") Is the sentence still wrong?
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doing some researches and discovering new scientific features of the world necessitates spending money,
doing some researches and discovering new scientific features of the world necessitate spending money,
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Why you get a new conclusion you never mentioned before:
'all rich countries had better be responsible to assist poor ones which are coping with some deleterious disasters.'
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