more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that these day, there is a growing number of people using online news as their primary mean of reading. Although many argue that news on the Internet will gradually replace the traditional papers, I would contend that the traditional one is predominant source of news.
On the one hand, despite some benefits online new has brought, it is undeniable fact that it also has some considerably drawbacks. First of all, being accessed through the Internet, it certainly has adverse impact on user’s health. In order to acquire information of online news, readers have to keep their eyes glued to the screens, resulting in eye-ailments. Also, long period exposure to the screens is responsible for chronic headache like migraine, since it proved that waves from these devices are detrimental for neuron cells in human brains. Apart from health problems, it is evident that news on the Internet sometimes is unreliable. Due to the fact that there is a lack of regulation for website, it rarely go under proofreading process like the printed one. Consequently, it may have negative influence on reader’s perception. For instance, the race to the White House in 2017 was greatly affected by the sham news on Facebook and Twitter.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why press still choose printed news as their essential information channels. Firstly, a majority of people on the world are unable to access to the Internet news since computers are relatively costly, especially for those from developing countries. As a result, traditional newspaper are considered to be a dominant source of information. Secondly, it is evident that printed version tend to have superior content than online one. Admittedly, printed newspaper bring attractive economic-prosperity by advertising and fee charging. Consequently, it will enable the press to put greater investment in content, whereas online users usually is limited to access some feature since they do not have to pay anything.
It goes without saying that, despite the sharp growth of online news, it is my belief that newspapers will eventually a crucial source of information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
It is true that these day, there is a growing number of people us...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nal one is predominant source of news. On the one hand, despite some benefits o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, apart from, for instance, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24855491329 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93819640179 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575144508671 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2600116311 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23091290997 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694996276043 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562842351326 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153706853124 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317122116166 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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